This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is to remember my full stops. I need to improve on not using capital letters in the middle of my sentences . We also made a google draw showing the things that we would take with us in our hot air balloon.
The hot air balloon race
Bang! Bang! I got up and I packed my lunch. I put in doritos chips,milk and a torchlight .I took Tyrell and Joel with me as my crew.When we were in the fluffy clouds I almost got cloud sick in the shiny, fluffy clouds. I was up high .We had to go around the whole world to Kerikeri and back. I was afraid of heights.I was too high up in the sky. I wanted to get all the money. But I didn't win. So the winning crew shared the money with me . We all bought something . The other crew
was nice to me and my crew.
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