animal town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is full stop.

I need to improve on not forgetting about capital letters

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Here is my writing about Animal Town.

It feels good to be in animal town, but what does it look like? There's 8 animals on each side. These animals look nice to me, but why do they call it animal town? The lion looks weird lying on the roof. How could a giraffe fit in the van? The bird is colourful. It has blue, gold, black and shiny orange on the front of it. The granny koala hiding in the tree, climbing all the way up. It actually is a nice town after all. The sad zebra was walking sadly across the road and the animals were staring at it. I felt sad for it. The gorilla is sitting on the striped green chair, the possums were staring at the animals looking for a drive around. They are all colourful. The animals are under the Lions command.

The muscly gorilla and the fat bear are sitting in the yellow van.